Hi again, the technique applied here is correct, as the vanishing point for the corridor running backwards at left isn't shown located at the geometrical center of the corridor itself. That angles the corridor right, and communicates a right feeling of depth. Here, the technique has been stretched out near its limits, but not going overboard.
I wouldn't like much to turn this talk into technicalities, as your work is impressive even with that slight minor thing to point out (I guess only a modification in that area is needed to make your deviation really rock it out). I hope this helps somehow.
The only difference technically, between this one and mine is the distance of those two radiating vanishing points. If you draw the horizon line you will discover it. Otherwise, he did this more extreme than I do, everything looks extreme so that one thinks he did this on purpose, while my other vanishing point is far away and you cannot see it on the picture. You can probably try to match the edge to see where the vanishing point is